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Untitled - Heidi S

 

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By Heidi S.

11th Grade

 

            It all started with 2 girls growing up in Austin, Texas.  Their names are Rachel & Monica.  They did everything together.  They grew up together, and they went to high school together.  One day at high school Rachel met this really cute guy named Ross, and ever since that day they met they have been dating.  Monica, of course is very happy for Rachel, but still a little jealous.  Then one day Ross mentions to Rachel that he has a best friend named Chandler that would be perfect for Monica.  So, Ross introduced Chandler to Monica, and ever since they have been together.  So, ever since high school, Ross, Rachel, Monica & Chandler have been best friends.  In high school, Rachel was very smart. She had a 3.5 grade point average throughout her whole high school life, while she was also in volleyball, basketball, & track.  She was so good in volleyball that she got a scholarship to Texas State.  She was so excited.  Ross decided to go with her to Texas State.  Monica, on the other hand was not good at sports at all.  But she was super smart.  She had a 4.0 throughout all her high school years.  Right after hearing about Rachel, Monica got a letter saying that she is getting to go to college for free at Texas State because of her grade.  She was ecstatic!  When Chandler found out about Monica and Ross & Rachel, he knew that he was going to go to Texas with all of them.  So that fall they all attended Texas State.  Monica & Rachel roomed with a girl named Phoebe.  They all became very close.  Ross & Chandler roomed with a guy named Joey, and also got very close to him.  So, Ross & Chandler introduced Joey to Phoebe, and again there was another couple.  So here are these 6 best friends who have been in college for 3 years.  They all haven’t had much of a vacation since they came to college.  So, they decided before they started their senior year in college they all should go on a road trip.  They had all been saving for awhile from their jobs, so they all had enough money to go on a trip.  But they couldn’t decide where to go.  Monica said Florida, Rachel said California.  But the guys wanted to do something very different.  And all of a sudden Phoebe said why don’t we go to the boundary waters in Minnesota?  I used to go all the time when I was a little girl, and it was so much fun.  Joey, Chandler & Ross loved the idea.  Monica & Rachel didn’t like to camp so they didn’t like the idea at first.  But the guys and Phoebe promised that it would be fun.  So Rachel & Monica said ok.  Who knew what they were about to get into.  So the gang leaves the next day for Minnesota in Rachel’s Escalade.  The girls were in the front talking about girl stuff and laughing.  And the boys were in the back talking about boy stuff.  They were all having a good time.  Their first stop was Oklahoma City.  They went to dinner at a very nice restaurant and they stayed in a very nice Hotel.  Early the next day, they continued their drive.  That night, they decided to stop in St. Louis.  They again decided to go and eat at a very nice restaurant and stay at a nice hotel.  The next day very late they arrived in Duluth.  They were 2 and a half hours away from the Boundary Waters, but they decided to stay in Duluth tonight because they wanted to put their camp equipment up in daylight.  So that night they wanted to have fun so they went to clubs, and then back to their hotel. Early the next morning they were on their way to the Boundary Waters.  They arrived and were all (except for Rachel & Monica) very excited to be there.  All of the guys brought all of the equipment, tents, food, and all of the other necessities up to their camp ground.  They were very far in the woods, so they weren’t going to go anywhere when they were there, unless it was a serious emergency.  So the boys set everything up.  They set up 2 tents.  After they were all done setting up, it was time for supper, so the guys made supper, and the girls cut the fruit.  After supper they all watched the sun set and made s’mores, and decided to go out and explore the next day.  So all of them woke up the next day and ate cereal and decided to go and explore.  All three couples went separate.  All the couples decide to meet back at the camp when it starts to get dark.  But they all told each other that cell phones don’t work so it’s no sense of bringing them.  So Phoebe & Joey are talking and just admiring the beautiful outdoors.  All of a sudden Phoebe sees a beautiful patch of flowers and says “Joey come on lets go look at those beautiful flowers!”  And then Joey say’s well I kind of wanted to see that waterfall for a second so you go and look at the flowers and I will meet you there in a minute.  So Joey goes up the hill to see the waterfall.  Joey look’s at the waterfall for a few minutes and then comes back down the hill and is going to meet Phoebe at the patch of flowers like he said he would.  So Joey came to the flowers and he didn’t see Phoebe anywhere.  He yelled “Phoebe” and no answer.  He looked for her for a long time, and all of a sudden he sees footsteps.  He doesn’t know if they are Phoebe’s, but he follows them just in case they are.  So Joey is following these steps and it leads him to a house.  He wonders if he should go in or not.  He decided to go in.  He hears a screaming noise from the basement.  He opens the door, and walks down the stairs quietly. All of a sudden he sees two men skinning Phoebe alive.  All of a sudden Joey is struck in the head from behind……………………….

Meanwhile, Monica, Chandler, Rachel & Ross get back to the camp.  At first, they weren’t worried that Joey & Phoebe weren’t back yet.  But after three hours of waiting and it being very dark the gang began to worry.  Chandler & Monica decided to go and look for them, and Rachel & Ross stayed back at the camp in case Phoebe & Joey come back.  So Monica & Chandler look until they can’t look anymore and they decide to go back and see if Phoebe & Joey were at the camp.  They weren’t there.  But they couldn’t look for them anymore.  They had to wait until morning to start looking again.  It was very hard for Chandler, Monica, Ross & Rachel to get to sleep knowing that there friends are in trouble.  The next morning Joey wakes up bloody and wounded.  He sees four men in the kitchen eating.  He looks around him and he thinks he is dreaming but he is not.  He sees dead bodies all around him.  He also sees human eye’s in a jar.  He is thinking about his four friends that are in danger.  He wants to tell them all that is going on but he can’t because he can’t go out of the house because the killers will hear him and they will shoot him.  Meanwhile, Chandler, Rachel, Monica, & Ross are just waking up.  They don’t even have time to eat breakfast.  Both of the couples go and look for Joey & Phoebe.  Monica & Chandler walked through dirt and trees looking.  They looked for a long time.  They yelled “Phoebe”? And then they would yell Joey”? And of course no answer.  So they gave up because it was dark so they went back to the camp.  Rachel & Ross had no luck either.  The next day the same thing is happened.  Chandler & Monica went and looked, and so did Ross & Rachel.  While Monica & Chandler were looking they saw some blood on the on the ground.  Chandler thought something was wrong, and Monica thought it was just from an animal.  Chandler knew something was wrong so he made Monica and him go back to the camp.  When they got there Chandler told Ross & Rachel what they saw.  It scared them.  Monica said “I am not going to sit here and be scared.  My friends are missing and I am not going to give up until I find them.” And she said that she doesn’t care if no on e comes with her.  So Monica left.  Chandler realized that she should not be alone so he went after her.  Monica went a direction that she had not gone before.  She kept walking, and she saw a house.  The house where Phoebe was killed and where Joey was.  She went up to the window very secretly, and she looked in and saw Joey all bloody, and she saw three men eating.  She did not go in.  She ran as fast as she could so no one would see her.  She looked to the left of her and saw Chandler hanging from a tree! She screamed so loud.  She found Rachel & Ross.  She was balling and she told them everything.  Ross & Rachel say this is creepy we have to get out of here.  And Monica says No, we are not leaving without Joey.  Rachel & Ross say it’s risky to go in the house, and they say they are going to go get the police.  Monica say’s she is not leaving, and Ross & Rachel say fine.  Right when Ross & Rachel get to the car, Rachel say’s Ross we have to go back and help Monica I feel very worried about her being all by herself.  So Ross & Rachel go back to there camp and it is all destroyed.  They look for Monica for a long time and they can’t find here anywhere.  Ross & Rachel are running all over and right when they said this is enough we have to get out of here they both get hit from the behind and are both out cold.  While all of this is going on, all of the four killers were out of the house, and Joey was able to escape, and grab a bat they use to beat people.  When Rachel & Ross woke up they were being dragged into a house by two men.  Right when the killer was about to chop Ross up with a chainsaw, Joey hit him hard in the head with his bat, and then he hit the other killer in the head.  He untied Ross & Rachel and told them about everything.  He told them how Phoebe died.  And Ross & Rachel told Joey that Chandler had died.  But no one knew where Monica was.  Joey said that there were four killers and there were two that were still out there so they had to really hurry.  Joey, Rachel & Ross started running as fast as they could, but Joey was behind because he was hurt.  Ross, Chandler, & Rachel all make it to the car, only to find that the tires are all popped.  Ross, Rachel & Joey didn’t know what to do.  They run to a road and they stay there and wait for cars to come by, but no cars are in sight.  They see a light ahead, so they run to it, and it is a gas station.  They all go in and the worker is killed and there is no one else in the gas station.  They get even more scared.  They all run out of there and they keep running ahead.  They sit on the road and they all start crying even harder and started talking about Monica and all the good times they had together.  Then Ross said Rachel, we don’t even know if Monica is dead.  And then Rachel said well it’s good to think positive, but she’s not going to survive in there.  They were all quiet.  Then Ross said lets keep on walking and see if we can find anyone.  So they kept walking.  They saw another light and wondered what it was.  It was a rest area.  They walked in and they saw someone dying on the floor.  They ran to him and said o my goodness! And the guy said run as fast as you can and get out of here there are crazy men going after people.  So Rachel, Ross, & Joey run out of the rest area and onto the street.  They ran until they couldn’t run anymore.  They all stop, and sit down.  They see a car coming towards them and they get all excited and yell Help! Help! And the car just drives right past them.  They decided to wait and see if another car would come, and soon enough another car was coming towards them.  The car stopped right in front of them and it was filled with four women.  The woman driving yelled get in quick, there’s crazy men on the loose! So Rachel, Ross & Joey get into the car.  Right when the doors shut the woman locks them and all of the woman take off there masks and say I bet you never expected it to be us now did you?  It was the four killers.  Ross, Rachel, & Joey all screamed.  And all the four killers yelled, sorry, but there’s no one or nothing that will help you now.  We are saving the gruesomist deaths for the three of you.  All of a sudden the killer in the passenger’s seat got a needle out and gave Rachel, Ross, & Joey each a shot of something that will make them sleep.  After a few hours Ross, Rachel, & Joey all woke up only to find themselves tied up in the killer’s house surrounded by dead bodies.

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